miércoles, 16 de mayo de 2012

WRITING: UNIT 3

AN UNFORGETTABLE EXPERIENCE

     It was a trip I'll never forget. We had been looking forward that journey becuase it was our end of year's trip. That day we met together in the square of our town and we were really a lot. When we climbed into the luxurious bus, we were very happy because we knew that our adventure was starting. We were going to Carlos Paz.
     When we arrived to Carlos Paz we saw that it was an amazing place. None of us had been there before. There were many shops, hotels, and obviously a great variety of theme parks which we wanted to visit.
     We went to different places everyday and in one of those places we had a problem. We had gone to the "Aerosilla" and when we finished our tour we had to wait until our bus arrived to take us to the hotel, but unfortunately the bus had had a puncture. So we had to wait until the problem was solved. We waited for a long time and suddenly a bus appeared, but to our surprise it wasn't ours. Instead of our bus, a very very old one had come. When we climbed into it, it was so dirty that we couldn't sit on its seats, so we had to clean them in order to travel a bit comfortably. Also inside of the bus there was a big wheel so some of my classmates sat there, and as the bus wasn't big enough some of us had to travel stand up. We felt so ashamed in that moment becuase there were a lot of other students in the theme park which had seen us climbing into that old bus and they were laughing. All in all, it was an unforgettable experience and we always laugh when we remember it!

4 comentarios:

  1. Hi ivy! your story was very nice and the problem that you had made me laugh poor you and your friends!

    well see you tomorrow!


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  2. Fortunately they rescued. But travel in dirty and old bus is always uncomfortable. Nice story Ivy!

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  3. ajjajjaja I like the part when you climbed into the old bus and the other students laugh xD
    Great job!!

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  4. you must have feelt really embarrased in that old, uncomfortable bus.
    You organized ur text very well.
    Check:
    "when we finish our tour we had to wait until... " caN U IDENTIFY THE MISTAKE?
    "but for our surprise" should be : TO OUR SURPRISE
    "it was too dirty that we couldn't sit on its seats" WHAT'S THE MISTAKE?
    vERY GOOD IVANA!

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